This is a rewrite of an earlier story, and it is only the beginning of it. I should mention that this is a very rough draft, but I felt like posting something IP so that you might let me know your opinions. I feel that this is a much more mature and realistic, for a fantasy, story than the original version and writing for adults always makes me feel more professional. Enjoy, all.
As always, I've copyrighted everything so please be mature.